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[DO NOT OPEN]

that was great wthell

[Jam Jubies]

u killed wanda how could u

[The Raymond Dance]

heheheehe

[Africa Dudes]

its back

[The Legend of Zelda: Link's Harem]

this is epic

[The World Ending]

ehehehe a grand classic

[NEWGROUNDS VS. THE WORLD]

so fucking epic dude

[FISH BREAD™]

that was real neat!

[Liney & Lucky in "AC, I See"]

I can tell you have a knack for cartoons! Wouldnt say the line has a very clear ...silhouette! Maybe some pupils would benefit the acting or some eyebrows?
I watched your recent cartoon too, definetely great cartoon timing and good sfx but you might wanna consider experimenting more with your lines characters!
Best of luck!

NotaBeethescribbler responds:

Thank you for the feedback. It is much appreciated and I am planning on taking it into consideration when making more of these.

[Shock]

You might be using the wrong framerate, its a bit too slow on the pacing try making the frames last lesser at least for quicker actions, like jumping or striking the sword or the golem punch, youd benefit with a better tempo!
Keep it up tony

tony4905 responds:

well i try making it faster and slower in some parts, but since i draw these layer by layer in photoshop i make the frames faster or slower in a video editor after i did the animation so i try my best, thanks for the feedback tho ;p